Looking at me from the cliff of life
Why do you still stare at my rise
It was the black choice you made
Created a deep hole in my soul.
I keep getting reasons to smile
Desires of going the long miles
But when the movement begins
Appears a black hole in my soul.
As I made my plans to move on
Filling the hole with my reasons
The hole disappeared for a while
Then the body turned into a hole.
I can still see someone on the cliff
Looking at every inch of my soul
Please don’t care about anything
‘Coj you are the one who dug it.
©4yearoldadult
4 Year Old Adult 
Beautifully written… 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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It is like watering the seeds right?? You bury them. Suffocate them. “Drown” in water… Ah. My mind wanders… Great write!
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Wandering minds are the best one to listen to. My seed is into it’s bud stage now, reaping the benefits from my experiences. 🙂
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One who dug your soul watches patiently how beautifully you are recovering again and again. This piece of writing is a great boost of positivity.(Y)
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You are the first one to understand the underlying tone of this poem. Cheers. 🙂 🙂
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(Y)
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Sad but beautifully written.
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Thanks for the appreciation. 🙂
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Much of the time we dig our own hole in which to dwell often not realizing it.
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Sounds like letting go. I will do a post later today about this. So many of us are in that process.
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Just now I read your post, love the song. It has made me rise a few inches higher on the wiseness scale 🙂
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Oh, thank you. I don’t know if that can be stated as “wise”. But I think it is another possible way of making peace with what is.
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Moving on is the best option to stay afloat. Life is too long to get stuck with things/people. 🙂
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I would even say it is too short to dwell in dark clouds… 😉
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I must say again “Nice to meet you” 😀
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😃 😉
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