Brown leaves fall in my courtyard
My life cycle moves another yard
Looking at it like a precise retard
I’ve used all my life’s trump-cards
Tiredness is leading me to a bed
Sleep is going to be a bit longer
Can’t ask anyone to wake me up
Because I know that this is my last
©4yearoldadult
4 Year Old Adult 
Your last lines always hit a dark and intense punch,
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Usually, those last lines are the ignition behind my posts. I am fortunate that it works 🙂
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This is really good. And if it’s one of your early poems, I can only wonder what beauty’s going to follow next!
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It just comes out sometimes, I am a negligible boat in a sea full of talented writers. In order to ensure the quality, I never write professionally.
P.S.: I am not sure of the beauty, but few of them stem from the Scottish beauties with 40% of alcohol
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Beautiful….lovely poem
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I am quite new to poems, it feels good that you liked it. 🙂
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🙂
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Beautifully written ❤
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Thanks a lot. 🙂
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Sorry if you’ve gotten a bajillion nominations for this award! Accept one more? 🙂 https://elizabethkara.wordpress.com/2015/08/24/starting-fresh-starting-new/
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Hey Elizabeth! I am sorry for responding late. For some strange reason, this comment went to the spam folder. I have added your name to the award post, have a look: https://4yearoldadult.wordpress.com/2015/07/06/dragons-loyalty-award/
Thank you once again. I hope you are having a great time. Keep writing. 🙂
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No worries. It took me a month to respond to my nomination, so you’re ahead of schedule . . . In my opinion, at least 🙂
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“Can’t ask anyone to wake me up
Because I know that this is my last”
Great Lines.
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I am overwhelmed by the appreciation. Have a great week.:)
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That was touching.
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This one was without the Whiskey 😉
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😃
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