As I try to create a masterpiece for YOU
Trying to make the smiles come true
I end up writing it in a few minutes
My writing has no more deep secrets.
YOU are the mountain I wish to climb
YOU are the spring that makes me blind
To see only YOU, the special kind
Thoughts are scattered, it’s you that bind
YOU are the one that keeps me driving
The soothing music & the rhythm is exciting
The only one that holds me together
YOU stand by me when no-one gathers
YOU are the inspiration of my words
The one who means to me the world
YOU are the dream where hearts curled
My mind asked ‘Who is YOU’, silence unfurled
©4yearoldadult
Beautifully written. What a lucky YOU (Both of you)!
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Thanks a lot. That YOU is just fiction, I am happy with it because it stays on unconditionally 🙂
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Well, that is one way of getting unconditional love.
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I agree 🙂
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This is beautiful..:)
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An attempt to match up to the level of your poems 😉
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Thank u…:) but I think each of us have our style..ur lines are crisp and yet lovely.. Well m not much good at short ones..:)
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Longer ones are your forte. Have a great weekend 😉
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You too :D.. Have refreshing on.. 😀
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Beautiful post!
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Thanks a lot for appreciation. 🙂
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WoW!
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That is wonderful! Isn’t that this certain person everybody dreams of to have in their lives? Beautifully written!
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I second that. That someone keeps us alive, inspiring us at every step. Fictional or real, why should we complain when it help. 🙂
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That’s never anything wrong. What comes from a place of love can never be wrong since it spreads what it comes from…
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I agree with each and ever word of that statement. 🙂
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😀
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