Tell me where do I stand
And why should I pretend
If it is a good love story
Not all have a happy end.
Time is a great healer
I need a greater one
Medicines are around
I think, I need noone.
The years were great
And I have no regrets
Your love was ectasy
Your pain is a legacy.
©4yearoldadult
4 Year Old Adult 
Love this one! Sometimes it is the most painful heartbreaks that make the best memories …years down the lane. So pain is good because it is evidence of how deeply you loved and are capable of loving.
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Hahahahahahaha, this comment was destined to be read today. I have rediscovered my capabilities. 😉
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I would venture than all love stories come to an end–probably not a happy one for someone. That, i suppose, is the price of opening ones heart. Your poem captured the rawness of these emotions so well.
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It is harsh when the end is because of a third person. But, that is how we learn and grow as a person. Thanks for your kind words 🙂
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You’re very welcome.
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Again, I am amazed with your writing! Beautiful words. Thank you.
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GLad to know that you liked it, thank you for the appreciation. Best wishes to the Globe Trotter community 🙂
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Beautiful writing! ~ Happy weekend & best wishes to you, Aquileana
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Such words keep me going, thanks a lot. Have a rocking weekend 🙂
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Wonderfully penned…loved the way you’ve expressed the emotions…. 🙂
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Thanks a lot for your appreciation. Have a great weekend 🙂
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Beautifully expressed sentiments. 🙂
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Thanks a lot for the complement. Have a great time 🙂
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Loved it! Check out my post and fill me in with your comments 🙂
http://cheenithoughts.com/spotted/7-welcome-to-london/
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Thank you, I’ll surely do that 🙂
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This is sad. I’m sorry for your pain and hope time will ease it. In the meantime, keep writing and stay away from prescriptions!
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I am fortunate to arouse such thoughts of concern. Thank you. My posts are not entirely my experiences, they are a blend of things around me. 🙂
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Time is a great healer..
you better rely on it..
others are not medicines
just a way to escape..
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Believe it or not, I thought of ending this poem after the first stanza and letting my readers continue it. Thanks for the prescription 🙂
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hehee.. I just wanted u to be okay..w/o having to take “medicines..”
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I am flattered by your words of concern. I am alright. Thank you. Have a great evening 🙂
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