When mind sings those words
The laugh requires no efforts
The moments seems shorter
The bitter ones taste sweeter
Rough road looks smoother
The sleep is lost to the dreams
Silence speaks to your mind
And sleeping becomes harder
This is not always about love
You should go & see the doctor
©4yearoldadult
Unexpected ending–that’s what makes for great humor! 🙂
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This was just a casual attempt at humour. It’s nice to hear that you liked it 🙂
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I sure did!
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I love every line of this poem, and the last line made me laugh! Wonderful.
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That solves the purpose of this post. Thank you 🙂
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Wonderfully penned… 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Love these words:
When mind sings those words
The laugh requires no efforts
And then the last line gave me a laugh.
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Good to know that I succeeded in bringing some smiles. Thanks for the RT 🙂
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A very good one!
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Nice to hear that 🙂
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Love it! 🙂
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My previous poem had a sad tone, I have just tried to lighten up the mood 😉
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